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All Deviations
All Deviations


You’re a poisoned flower
You kept him intoxicated
For hours
While I sat
And wondered why.

You’re a poisoned flower
You kept him intoxicated
For hours
With her hands
And your kisses
And your never ending demands.

You’re a poisoned flower
You kept him intoxicated
For hours
While you glared
And whispered curses
When I went to go
Dance with him
For hours.

You’re a poisoned flower
You kept him intoxicated
For hours
Leaving me in the dust
To rust.
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~Ocelot123:iconOcelot123: Dec 15, 2007, 2:26:56 PM Mood: Happy
Great Piece. Liked the repetition, not too much detail. Good job :)
~emokidunleashed:iconemokidunleashed: Dec 16, 2007, 3:26:31 PM
thanks.

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broken cant be fixed unless you are loved.
=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Jan 6, 2008, 11:51:37 AM
Are you okay my darling :hug:
Whats happened :(?

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~emokidunleashed:iconemokidunleashed: Jan 8, 2008, 1:29:56 PM
i am fine just had a mis hap with my ex.

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broken cant be fixed unless you are loved.